Cold summer evening brimmed with wet earth,
Swell the spirits to enthuse a sense of mirth.
Talking and laughing the crowd pulls along
Chanting for the fellow a happy birthday song.
Sleepy in the classes , Merry in the crowd…
Beating the rain I called names aloud
The inquisitive and carefree,the dull and the bubbly….
All in one walked down the alley.
The waters are set awaiting a tide,
Sway the fellow ,throw him
Then run back and hide.
All attempts go in vain the hunters pull you down
They swing and shoot you,Like an air borne clown.
Swollen spirits sing the jingle,
Once in the day its time to mingle
Talking and laughing the crowd pulls back
Encore is incumbent, another day and jack.
Nice stuff.. written by you?
@Mohit : yep..
Now, this is awesome.
The first part fels like you have just painted a beautiful picture of the birthday dunkings ;-)))
Well written.
now that’s better than a collection of dunk photos 🙂 hope u don’t delete. wanna read it five years down the line.
too good bubbly!!!
very well written..so we have a budding poetess in our batch!
@: dats the dunking anthem 😉
Great One – Dunking anthem for sure…..
Linked you at My blog – This should go onto the ISB Collaborative Blog
Linked u @ my blog.
Scorching summer and parched earth
deep cracks and unquenched dearth
No words no hope no wishesh to long
there couldnt me more a melancholy song
@violets: why such melancholy!
coz thats the way life is – happiness is a phoney
a midas chase !!